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Momma taught me weaving.
Weft. Warp. Take-up. Let-off.
Color. Texture.
Figuring men don’t much like the female world, we made us a place in the barn loft, where menfolk only went at Christmas to retrieve the plastic tree.
But Uncle Toby, Boxman and Coxum – upriver twins, and Father Axend kept sniffing around me and Momma, finding excuses to come upstairs to put their grimy hands on us.
Enough.
We wove a web.
Come for a jigger of whiskey. Sit here. Scooch left. Perfect.
Each time Momma opened the trap door and a man was let-off, she and I clinked jiggers.
“Let off” is a lovely piece of euphemism
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Thanks! I was a weaver for about three years ages and ages ago, so had to look up the terms. I never learned take-up and let-off, but love them.
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A web of deception with a trap door for good measure. A sure thing.
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Yes, sir! Sometimes I think I need me one of them.
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What a great voice and fine web. Raising my glass to those ladies, and you, word-spinner. 🙂
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Thanks so very much, fellow word-spinner.
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A tidy and efficient way to get rid of the vermin.
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Your comment reminds me of Sweeny Todd. Thank you.
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Haha! Good for them! Let off, indeed…
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Bye-bye bad men. Thanks for reading and leaving a reply! May your weather cool off. Cheers!
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Buh-bye! Yes, starting this weekend… hopefully.
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Lovely flow to this, and I’m glad she and Mamma found away to rid themselves of grubby hands, eve if it was a bit extreme. Makes me wonder what happens to the cast offs after they fall!
Jen
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Perhaps a tale for later. Thanks for stopping by and leaving a reply!
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Oooooo
I love this. Great descriptions here. Great voice too.
Smart women. Good on them.
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Thanks so very much, Laurie.
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Good on them, ridding the world of vermin and using their skills to boot. I love the voice of the story and the descriptions. Well done, Alicia!
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Thank you!
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LOL…yay!
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Good on ’em, right?
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What an absolutely delicate, yet absolutely powerful use of metaphor! Lovely laugh it gave me, too. Wonderful job!
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Thanks so much! I’m glad it worked for you.
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Said the flies who were really spiders.
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Some ladies can only take so much groping. Thanks for reading and leaving a reply.
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This is a great taste of what could be a larger story. I like the weaving aspect to it. I’ve always thought that would be fascinating to learn, although it would take a lot of patience, I’m sure.
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Thank you for stopping by. I’m one of those people who love the minutiae of a project so weaving was easy for me to learn although I haven’t woven for years.
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The secrets we women keep, if men knew 🙂 Such a tidy way to keep them at bay. Well-done.
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Thank you! Men like these need some come upins’
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Just love this story – the voice, the viewpoint, the language. And the ending! Ha. Perfect.
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Thank you, Margaret.
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I’m keeping well clear! Nice one!
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Good plan! Thanks, Keith, although I can’t imagine you being a man like that.
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Loved the voice in this, and the imagery of it. Well done
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Thanks, Sandra!
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I like your dual use of the term, “let-off”. They were merciful with the offenders. A quick death was more than they deserved.
When women learn to regard other women as allies rather than competition, powerful things can happen.
Alicia, can you tell I liked your story 🙂
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What a wonderful comment. Thank you!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Good flow and voice. Nicely done!
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Thank you!
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Dear Lish,
I love the voice in this. Left off indeed. Good riddance.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle.
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