Lissette imagined the stage would be cold and dark and lonely.
But when she stepped in front of the orange screen and the lights flashed on and the soldiers clapped
she forgot the guards had replaced her striped pajamas with red leotards and a purple camisole
and she danced – like they told her to.
Bare feet flying, arms twisting, this once pretty girl (for she had possessed blonde ringlets
before the razor blade sliced them off) warmed to the shouts, brightened at the hoots and
pretended each man was a friend. She danced because, if she didn’t, she would die.
Powerful piece. I’m not sure what’s happening here but I can only too well imagine… Nice work.
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Thanks, Sandra, this is what happens when a person can’t sleep at 3:00 am.
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This has me thinking about Joy Division and WWII — about women forced into prostitution and burlesque shows.
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Exactly.
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By exactly I meant the WW II part, I don’t know what the Joy Division is either. Helena, can you enlighten me?
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I see we went in a similar, terrible direction this week. Well-written.
janet
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Janet, we truly did! Maybe because we both used the Greyzed (I think that’s what it’s called) format on our blog. The letter home is poignant and sad. How many girls end up like that I wonder.
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Very well-done! Caught the feelings and venue.
I have never heard of this Joy Division. What was it?
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Thank you! I’m not sure what the Joy Division was, I was merely going for the feeling of a WW II prison camp.
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I looked up Joy Divisions: Groups of Jewish women in the concentration camps during World War II kept for the sexual pleasure of Nazi soldiers. I imagine they were like the Comfort Women who were forced into prostitution for Japanese soldiers during WW II.
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Very interesting. I had no idea these existed.
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I have read quite a bit about the Comfort Women. Sad business, that.
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The works brilliantly. I really felt Lisette’s disorientation. This is what good flash is all about.
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Thanks for reading my piece.
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Powerful and unfortunately too true. Nice job, well done!
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Thank you, Shandra. Other pieces this week were unfortunately too true.
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Alicia, excellent imagery! The story’s a bit of a mystery to me, but the writing is very good.
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Thanks, Dawn.
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Think WW II and concentration camps.
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I have always been intrigued by that time period. I think she was probably lucky that she COULD dance.
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Me, too. And, yes, she was lucky to have a “talent” or perceived talent to save her life. Thank you for ready the piece.
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Dear Alicia,
She danced her way into my heart. Bravo!
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle.
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Man, that was powerful and very real. I’m rooting for her, but feel so very bad for her and her situation. I hope she dances her way out once and for all…
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One step at a time. Thanks, Hala.
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A well-written story that’s both beautiful and sad. You’ve painted a heart-rending picture.
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Thank you for your kind comment.
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Moving piece. The world can be so cruel.
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Yes, it can. And it doesn’t seem to be getting much better.
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To be forced into that situation.. how chilling.. still when the only hope is death.. humans has a strong will to live.
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Yes, they do. Thanks, Bjorn.
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Excellent take on this prompt. This is the kind of story that goes on in your mind.
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Thanks for looking back on other Friday Fiction stories I’ve contributed. I appreciate It and I appreciate your comment. Alicia
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