Irena arrived by Kindertransport. Although strange, her new parents were kind.
“Poppa” played banjo at the pub. “Momma” mended clothes.
Neither earned much money.
Unlike her friend Amelia, placed in a house where daily lessons were beaten into her,
Irena learned English listening to “Poppa” recite words to songs.
He pronounced them slowly, spelled them for her while she carefully drew letters on the chalkboard beside the window.
Years passed. Irena grew tall and lanky and beautiful. She forgot her home in Warsaw Ghetto, forgot how to speak her native Polish.
Never, ever did she forget her real Momma and Poppa looking out the window of an entirely different train.
Lessons
Posted: October 8, 2014 in Friday FictioneersTags: banjo, ghetto, kindertransport, letters, mending, music
So much said, you might forget your language.. but never your mom and dad on that other train…
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Thanks for reading and commenting, Bjorn. I think it would be very hard to forget one’s parents – especially under such horrific circumstances.
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Ouch —-
so beautifully written. I’m glad you saved the most important details for last.
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Thank you. I changed the ending twice. Glad you liked the final draft.
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Very much so! 🙂
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Wow, a powerfully emotive story. Well written.
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Thank you, Maree, for reading and leaving a lovely comment.
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Irena’s life goes on. I wonder how she’ll reconcile her good fortune of getting kind ‘parents’ with the tragedy she’ll never forget. I like the understatement of your ending. Powerful.
Cheers
Marg
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Thanks, Margaret. The ending went round and round a couple of times.
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If there’s one thing you’ll never forget, it’s your parents. Powerful story, especially the last line.
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THANKS!
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Painfully moving, Alicia. The imagery is haunting. Nice job!
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Thank you, Dawn.
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Much said in few words. Great description of horrific times.
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I think anytime a child is separated from his/her parents it must be the worst times for all.
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Whoa . . . that last sentence just stuck a fork in me. Very powerful! I think this is one of your best pieces ever.
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OOPS! Sorry about the fork, but I’m glad it packed a bunch. Thanks so very much for reading – and commenting.
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Dear Alicia, This is so moving and a wonderful story. I don’t think she will ever forget her parents being on the other train and I hope it doesn’t start causing her emotional distress. Excellent story! Nan 🙂
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Dear Nan, thanks so much for reading and commenting and thinking my story was excellent. It means a lot.
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Dear Alicia,
Subtle. Beautifully subtle. We both know what train and where it took her parents, don’t we? Again, well layered with a whole novel written between the lines. Love this.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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THANKS!!!! I appreciate your kudos.
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I LOVE IT!!!
Great story and I’ll tell you why: my old girlfriend’s name is Irena and her dad is very musical as is she. Her dad is a holocaust survivor as is her mom’s family. They are terrific people. I hope to visit them while I’m here.
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Whoa! So many coincidences. I changed the name of my main character twice and settled on Irena. I hope you get to see her while your there (where is there?)
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She’s not too far from here, but I doubt I’ll see her. It depends.
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I wasn’t aware of the Kindertransport until now, so I looked them. That made your story even more moving and touching.
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Subroto – thanks for taking the time to look that I’m. After all these years, I’m still a computer nerd and forget to add links to my stories. I appreciate your time.
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What a powerful story, Alicia!
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Thank you!
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Beautiful and tragic story that must have been repeated in thousands of lives.
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And it probably still is being repeated. I don’t think humans will ever learn from history. Thanks for commenting.
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Sad story with some consolation to it.
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Indeed. At least Irena grew up in a loving home. Thanks for reading Lessons
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Awesome story this week, Alicia. I especially like the way you use the windows in your story.
All my best,
Marie Gai
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Thank you! It took awhile t see the little chalkboard which kept me away from Tears for Fears. Thanks for commenting.
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What an incredible, layered piece, Alicia. So much here. The ending leaves quite an impression.
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Thanks, Amy, glad you liked it. As I said, I changed the ending a couple of times.
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Wow! Very emotional and powerful. Great last sentence.
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Thank you, Perry.
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Good story Alicia. Very moving.
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Glad you thought so, Dawn. I appreciate you stopping by. Alicia
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Powerful. Especially the last line.
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Thanks, Alice.
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Powerful seems to be the operative word here and everyone who has used it is right! Well done!
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Thank you!
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Sad and uplifting at the same time – beautifully done. Your title and story made me think of ‘Lessons in Love’ (it must the 80s theme I and others went for with the Tears for Fears reference this week, all that musical memory bashing around in my brain). http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gt7mtdLha-c
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Sarah Ann, Thanks for your lovely comment and attaching the youtube video. I remember that song! Cheers, Alicia
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Heartbreaking story! I was deeply moved by it.
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Thanks. Glad it hit home. Alicia
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