Seven-year-old Peter loved the Fourth of July
until last year when he threw the hot wire
left after his sparkler died and it landed in
his little sister’s eye. On accident.
Daddy told him dozens of times to
put the glowing wires down IMMEDIATLY
after the sparks stopped flying.
But he couldn’t resist watching the iridescent
aluminum sail through the air, leaving
a silver shadow behind.
Now he sits with a pile of
spent wires by his hip – a glowing wire
in his hand. Carefully he presses it to
the skin on the inside of his arm and finishes
spelling TINA.
Heartbreaking; really heartbreaking. Well done.
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Thanks, Sandra. Those weird sparkly things in the picture reminded me of both pom-poms and sparklers. I went with the sparkler idea and remembered how wonderful the old ones were and how dangerously hot.
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Wow! That’s such a powerful, awful, wonderful ending. I feel so much for him (and his sister).
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Thank you, Claire. Guess I was feeling a bit morbid this a.m. Glad you stopped by and left such a kind reply.
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Aww, so easily done, in a moment, and forever regretted. I love seeing this story from the boy’s perspective, and still being able to feel it from those of the sister and parents.
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Thanks! Sad that accidents happen in a blink and there’s nothing to be done but regret the outcome. Glad you liked the POV.
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The anguish is so palpable on that one. Nicely done.
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Thanks, Karen.
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I could easily have been that boy.. how often i did stupid things like that.. Two children heartbroken.. so sad.
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Me, too (did stupid things, that is). I think many of us are lucky to get out of childhood in one piece. Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, Bjorn.
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Creepy and so sad. I hope his sister is okay and that he gets help for his self-harm. I’m sure she wouldn’t want him to do that. Powerful story.
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Thanks, it is a tad creepy, isn’t it?
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Dear Alicia,
Pretty stiff self-punishment. Well done and sad.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I think Peter’s pretty sad about not paying attention to what his dad said and hurting his sister so badly. Thanks for commenting, Rochelle.
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Oh, this is sad, but also wonderful. His sister will probably forgive him, but will he?
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Thanks so much for reading!
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That’s quite the punishment he’s inflicted on himself. Great story.
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Thank you, Alicia
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Alicia, your story rings all too true and breaks my heart. So many people can be impacted by one incident like the one you describe.
janet
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Indeed, one impulsive act and . . . . Glad to see you’re back, by the way. Alicia
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Thanks. 🙂
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Dear Alicia, Fourth of July celebrations are fun each year but are always dangerous. I remember a Roman Candle shooting toward us once and how scared we were. Poor boy to self mutilate himself because of an accident! Good job! Sad, Nan 🙂
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A friend of ours was hit by a rocket one Fourth of July. Burned a hole in the jacket he’d purchased just that day, Better that jacket than him. Thanks for reading.
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You’re going to give me nightmares about my 2 year old son and sparklers now……..
Nicely done!
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Ooops! Sorry. Luckily they make them so whimpy now they’re not even half as fun as they were when I was a kid (showing my age, here) hot wires and all. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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sad story. i felt sorry for both kids.
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Thanks for reading!
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So very sad the guilt the little boy is feeling. You expressed it well in your excellent story.
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Thanks! I’m glad you liked the story. It was an odd picture to write about. Cheers!
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I have to agree about the picture. When I saw it I thought about hundreds of different sizes of magnets thrown together and bulldozing itself through a scrap metal yard. 😀
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What a wonderful image!
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Sad and powerful, Alicia. The young man needs to be shown grace–it’s the only thing that will rescue him. I hope his family can help.
All my best,
Marie Gail
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Yes! Hopefully he’ll get help – when someong realizes what he’s up to. Thanks for the super cool picture.
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That’s very sad. You make us feel for the whole family.
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Wow! Thanks. Alicia
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Oh poor Peter. I just want to hug him.
Great story. You made it come alive.
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Thanks. He has a long road to haul….
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This is heartbreaking, but beautifully expressed.
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Thanks so much, Dawn, I always appreciate your stopping by, Alicia
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Those sparklers are mesmerizing, are they not? And they seem to be harmless when you play with them. Oh, poor kid. I wish there was another way. Beautifully written, Alicia.
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Thanks so much. Hopefully he’ll get caught. Alicia
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Very moving, well written
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Such tragedies can happen just like this. A moment of foolishness, or carelessness. It’s sobering to think of how many near misses each of us must have in life. Your story shows the outcome and the emotional cost when luck doesn’t step in to intervene.
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Margaret, what a delightfully thoughtful comment. Thank you for taking the time to read my 100 words. Alicia
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this one tugged at my heartstrings. Talk about conveying emotion, you did it extremely well (as evidenced by the comments). The best I’ve read based on this photo.
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Wow! Thank you so much for such a lovely comment. I appreciate it.
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This is a heartbreaking story which you have put across brilliantly. The unfortunate sister may (or may not) have lost an eye and her grief-stricken brother must live with what he did forever. The ending is very poignant. A wonderful response to the prompt. 🙂
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Thanks so much! I appreciate your reading and leaving such kind words.
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I feel so badly for Peter 😦 Hopefully someone will notice what he’s doing to himself and he’ll heal emotionally. Such a young age to feel so guilty.
Ellespeth
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This is one time I hope a child gets caught doing something so terribly wrong. Someone WILL step in, I’m sure. Thanks!
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Heartbreaking but so well done, Alicia, Great description. —- Suzanne
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Thanks very much, Suzanne.
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