Thanks to Rochelle for leading our merry band of Friday Fictioneers, it’s amazing how you can keep up with everything! Thanks, also to ceayr for providing the picture prompt. When I enlarged it and “saw the writing on the wall” I absolutely had to run with it.
“I’ve lived beside the pond so long,” Botene thought, “I no longer remember when I arrived.”
Nor was there any memory whether Botene was man or woman. His/her hair was brittle, like sticks, and
his/her skin rough as bark. Through time his/her feet had spread until shoes wouldn’t fit.
People ignored all these things when they asked, “Will I marry?” “Have sons?”
“Get rich?” Botene didn’t know. Perhaps if the villagers brought
gifts: shampoo, or lotion, or food he/she might care.
Still, when Botene smiled and said, “Everything is going to be alright,” never anything else,
the villagers went away happy.
That’s a great take on the prompt
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Thank you. I saw “Everything is going to be alright” on the brick building in the background and saw the tree as a very old and tired person, then tried to tie it all together. Glad you enjoyed the story.
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It’s such a reassuring line.
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Kind of like a friendly troll!
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Ah! I hadn’t thought if him/her that way. Like the troll beneath the bridge. Thanks for the smile.
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Any time… 😀
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Loved the idea of giving the tree a voice and character. Well done.
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Thanks very much.
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I want to visit Botene. Once again an incredible twist on a picture prompt.
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Thanks, Rea Ann. Maybe if we take presents he/she will say something more than “Everything is going to be alright.”
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Oh i do love what you picked up from the picture… yes the tree look very much like a person.
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Thanks, Bjorn. The tree looked like a very patient person waiting for something more.
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Dear Alicia,
Fascinating take on the prompt. Good for you for looking deeper than face value.
Shalom,
Rochelle
PS Happy Birthday!
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Thanks, Rochelle. I thought about what to write while in my aerobics class. Perhaps that’s why I missed a step or two. Thanks for the birthday wishes. ; – )
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Good one. I never got that far when I looked at the photo, you dug deeper.
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I try.
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An all round observant take on the prompt. Enjoyed it.
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Thanks, Sandra, I’m glad you enjoyed the story. And, again, welcome back!
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I also enlarged the photo and tried to make a story out of the words, but failed. You did it so well!
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Gosh, thanks! You always make me feel like it’s worth trying another shot at a 100-word tale.
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i love the positive outlook.
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Thanks. Say, a l-o-n-g time ago you told me a shorter route to get the FF link and I’ve lost it. Could you please remind me?
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please find the instructions on this link:
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Fascinating little story. By the way, Botene told me to f_ _ _ off!
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Shame on Botene!
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Why did you act surprised?
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A wise man/woman. (Personally I use Google.)
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Google predicts the future???? Who knew?
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The story made me smile .
Lily
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I’m glad!
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Don’t know why I thought Botene was a frog!
Hehehe
Such selfish villagers.
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Perhaps you got him/her mixed up with Jeremiah! Thanks for reading.
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I guess if you don’t get the answers you want from Botene, you can always go ask his sister, Botox.
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Indeed, his/her sister would probably not look so scraggly. Hee Hee. Thanks for the great idea.
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I like this a lot. The idea of a being having been around so long they forget what gender they are – super. It has a sad, lonely feel to it too, though, this neutral creature alone by the pond. Love the physical description too – gorgeously done
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Lynn, thank you! I meant it to feel lonely. Your comment has lifted my spirits.
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Well, your intention certainly came through! My pleasure entirely 🙂
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I feel some Cajun influence in this.
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OhI like that. Wasn’t on my mind, but . . . Thanks, Dawn.
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What a wonderful story. A person turned into a tree, swaying in the wind and gently singing their comforting songs.
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I like that vision. Thanks so much for reading and leaving a comment.
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This is a wonderful idea. I just love it. Botene is a fascinating character. (Wherever did the name ‘Botene’ come from? It’s just right.)
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Thank you, Margaret. I made up the name. It seemed pretty noncommittal. My spell check kept trying to turn it into Biotene. ; – )
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Really creative, Alicia. She must be an old, old fortuneteller. At first, I thought it was a person who turned into a tree. Good writing. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thanks, Patricia! I always enjoy it when you stop by. Alicia
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Such a beautiful story, it radiates hope.
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Thanks. I think Botene is just tired, and trying to get by.
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