Rescuing My World

Posted: February 25, 2017 in What Pegman Saw
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Today Pegman took us to Brazil. Thanks for the inspiration K.

At the age of three, Balawandi entered the secret world of snake charmers. Being small, he charmed only small vipers. Ones his father brought in from the garden.
But on his eighth birthday, Father presented Balawandi with a newly-hatched cobra, saying, “Charm him properly and together, through time, you will liberate My World.”
Even as Balawandi transformed from a boney-kneed, wild-haired boy into a strong-shouldered man who turned young girl’s heads, the snake, Zarmin (Lucky), morphed from a sleek black and yellow banded juvenile into a majestic 26-pound coil of olive-green grace.
The two roamed – village to town – acquiring the reputation of being the most elegant snake charming team ever seen.
At last, they were invited to perform for Prince Gulabgir – kidnapper of women, trapper of lives.
The charmers’ rewards? A lifetime supply of live mice delivered weekly to Zarmin’s basket
and the release of Balawandi’s beautiful mother, Meree Duniya (My World).

(Word count – 152)

  1. Iain Kelly says:

    A lovely tale, I was chard by the simple story-telling 🙂

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  2. k rawson says:

    Love how the tale, and the subject of the tale, winds and surprises. Nicely done.

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  3. Dear Alicia,

    This one has such a Rudyard Kipling feel to it. Entertaining and uplifting. Well done.



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  4. DebraB says:

    An enchanting story. Well-done!

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  5. Excellent story. I like how you wound it up.

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  6. James says:

    Wonderfully woven.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Lynn Love says:

    Charming tale wiht a mythic feel – deceptively simple but perfect descriptions too. Lovely stuff Alicia

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  8. Thank you. You are always so kind.


  9. jellico84 says:

    Now, that was a tale to read! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

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