After eleven exciting days in Peru, I’m glad to be back in the company of the Friday Fictioneers. Today’s photo, posted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields, was provided by Fatima Fakier Deria. Thanks to you both.
I make my living chasing
salmon and halibut and dogfish
across miles of salt-scented waves
under the heat of the midday sun
or swallowed by a cacophony of rain.
I am alone ninety days out of the year and
have learned to enjoy the solitude.
I whistle along with sea birds,
play guitar and mend nets.
I need no partner
woman or man
to make the world go round.
I am content
until my feet anchor on land.
There I endure endless pawing,
cat-calls and intimidation
from fishermen threatened by
the existence of
independent women.
(100-words)
Ooh, clever you! You threw a curved ball there, bending our expectations, making us think it was a man when it was a female sailor.
Love those descriptions too – brief but vivid enough for a good flavour of the sea. Lovely Alicia
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Thanks, Lynn. A friend of mine is a fisherwoman. She is both beautiful and kind so has a heck of a time with men at port. This was dedicated to her. Glad you like it.
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Tough, being a woman in what is so generally a man’s world. I admire her for sticking it out – not sure I could be so resilient
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Dear Alicia,
I wondered why I hadn’t seen you around FF or Pegman. I’m happy to see you back. And such a lovely reason.
I wasn’t expecting a fisherwoman. Very well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle! The trip was a real whirlwind. Saw lots, slept little and had gobs of fun. It feels good to be back at FF. Lish
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clever!
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Thanks!
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Love the strength of the tone and the progression of the poem, the way in which the speaker starts with a matter-of-fact description of herself and ends by telling us how she relates to the world.
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Thank you, Magalay. I wanted to honor the strength of fisherwomen with this piece. The stories my friend has told about how she is treated in the fishing world make my skin crawl.
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I was an armorer and a combat instructor when I was in the military, two jobs where women are the minority. I have a pretty good idea about the sort of experience your friend speaks of, and why hearing it made your skin crawl. It has been a while for me, and some of the behaviors still infuriate me.
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I can only imagine! Thanks for your time in the military.
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You caught me out, with a lovely twist at the end.
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I’m so very glad you enjoyed the twist! Thanks, Michael.
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I LOVE this!
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Oh, Dale, thanks. I worried that it was too plain or boring or …. I appreciate your wonderful comment. THANKS!!
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i say where have all these strong women gone?
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I think they are there, always have been. They just move slowly and confidently behind the scenes. Waiting and watching. Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Nice one! I bet she’s glad to get back out there.
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I think she finds much comfort at sea. Thanks, Ali
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People talk about equality. Pffff… Great story, Alicia, and a great twist.
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Equality, schmuality. Thanks for reading.
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I absolutely love this.
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I’m so very glad. Thanks.
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Ooh, unexpected – and I liked it all the more for that!
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Thanks for stopping by, Louise. I’m glad the story caught you off guard.
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Great twist. I love independent women 🙂
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Thanks, me too!
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Great twist at the end. I was with her appreciating the solitude, I do myself on occasion, but thought she was going to welcome company once on shore, so it was a pleasant surprise in a sense to read the opposite. I sympathise with her.
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Thanks, Michael. I always appreciate your opinion.
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Yes – the twist is perfect building on male stereotypes, and then “BAM” you expose my prejudices.
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Yeah! I’m so glad the twist worked. I don’t think many people realize there are fisherwomen out there, sometimes working harder than the men – because they have to. Glad you stopped by, Bjorn.
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Brilliant. I love the way you paint a picture of someone alone, content with the sea, and then the wonderful twist at the end, where that someone is a woman. So clever. You made me smell the sea, taste the salt, and understand how a person could be content with such a life!
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Thanks, Sarah! I glad you could feel the sea.
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It’s a lonely life when you are a sole trader. Poetic prose that makes a strong statement. Nice one 👍
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Thanks!
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Cool, Alicia. As I read it, I thought it was a man. Talk about type casting.
Good for you for giving women the upper hand in this write. I LOVED it.
Isadora 😎
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Thanks, Isadora. The women I modeled it after is a wonderful, strong lady.
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👍🏻 😎
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A neatly tricky ending, Alicia!
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Thanks, the story didn’t start out that way, but after changing a few words, it ended up with a twist.
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I let put a huge sigh like a rolling ocean after reading this – the picture of true solitude is seductive.
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A lovely comment. Thanks.
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I could smell the sea and feel the salt of those first three stanzas – beautifully described. It’s a pity she had to return to the land of insecure men.
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Thanks, Sarah Ann. Those lines kind of remind me of sunburns!!!! Alicia
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Wonderful!
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🙂
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Hope you enjoyed Peru, sounds exciting. Nice to see a poem for FF and it is tough to be a woman in a male-dominated sphere. Nice tribute to your friend.
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Peru was pure magic. Thanks for reading and commenting on my story! Cheers.
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Men are applauded for being strong and assertive. A woman with the same qualities is considered a bitch. A woman has to have thick skin and be tougher than a man to survive among the sharks, whether it be at sea or in the business world.
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A sad truth, that. Thanks for stopping by!
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