Today Pegman took us to Palisade Rim/Ute Petroglyph Trail, Colorado in order to inspire a 150-word story. I’ve visited this area many times and am always fascinated by the petroglyphs, stories told by ancient hands or just a, “Hey! I was here.”
The People lived on this land for one-thousand years
before your people came,
offering greed and war
and turning our landscape into peaks of tattered garbage,
our lakes to pools of poison,
and our rivers into flowing yellow acid.
We hunted bear, fox, antelope, bison,
took only what was needed
and gave back ten-fold,
leaving the land unaltered
while moving place to place.
We thanked Mother Earth for her bounty.
Offered prayers and gratitude when she provided peace.
You? You brought disease, war, and tears beyond all imagining.
Soldiers killed our women and babies; butchered our men.
And when that failed to annihilate us
your men slaughtered our bison,
leaving piles of bones strewn across the grasslands.
Now you are welcome to this earth
for you have ruined the surface
and what lies beneath.
We will bide our time
until your God comes to ask,
“What have you done?”
Not a happy tale to be sure.
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This is what comes from someone who graduated in cultural anthropology, and did archaeology for ten years. Although Native Americans had their own wars, took slaves and weren’t so nice to one another all the time, at least they were kind to the earth.
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That’s the flip side to history, Alicia. I once wrote a time travel/alternate history story about what would have happened if the Europeans had been prevented in getting to the new world (I had a time anomaly transport prehistoric sea monsters into the North and South Atlantic) and in the 21st century, had three major indigionous nations peacefully ruling “America.” You are however correct in that back in the day, they waged wars, took slaves, and did a whole bunch of other “human” things to each other.
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Not only have you seen this place, you’ve heard it. Wonderfully done.
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Thanks, K. I feel like I’ve written something like this before. Maybe on Friday Fictioneers. I feel strongly about saving this earth and we’re doing such a poor job of it. Thanks for reading. And thanks for doing Pegman! I love the extra 50-words.
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I remember that earlier piece. It was very striking, and beautiful.
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This is a good poem, and a great polemic. That last line is an absolute killer! Lovely writing, Alicia!
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Thanks, Penny. I suppose it is a poem. I never mean to start out with this format, for I’m not a poet, but somehow points seem to come out more emphatic if I structure my short writings this way. Thanks for teaching me a new word ~ polemic. Always glad when you stop by. Alicia
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All too true and tragic story. Well done.
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Thanks! It seems to be a never-ending story.
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Very powerful. I love the ending.
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Thanks, Ali. A tale that will never end, me thinks.
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Your passion for the earth shine through, Lish. I love the scope of this piece and the voice which is balanced beautifully between haunting and haunted.
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Thanks, Kelvin! I do get a little testy about what is happening in our world. Seems like it’s been awhile since I’ve “seen” you!
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I know. Been absent working on an anthology which is just been submitted for proof reading. Thank you for gently enquiring. So many other hectic things happening here too. How is you? 🙂
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I’m good. Just submitted a manuscript to an agent for her opinion (on the ENTIRE manuscript, be still my beating heart!) I’m also getting a certification to teach aerobics at our very local health club. It’s fun. Thanks very much for asking. Good luck with your anthology. Exciting.
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Heartfelt and tragic. a cry from a destroyed people to their destroyers. Well written Lish
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Thanks, Lynn!
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