Wednesday/Friday has rolled around again. It took some time to come up with an idea to go with the photo our Fairy Blog Mother, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields, posted this a.m. but here is my 99-word stab at a story.
“Oh, Anne, you know Samuel’s dead.”
“No, he’s still alive. I feel it, here, in my heart.”
“Two years . . .”
“A mother knows if her son is dead. Mine isn’t.”
“But we found his camera. Shoes. And horse bones. All wrapped in vines and decay.”
“No matter! My Samuel doesn’t need those things to live! My Samuel is strong and smart.”
“But he knew nothing about the Amazon. Snakes, gnats, mosquitos can drive a man insane!”
“This was his third expedition. He knew! He did!”
Glassy-eyed Samuel walks silently along the Xingu River. Ten shrunken heads dangling from his belt.
Has he fallen that much in love with his new environment and moved in?
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He’s gone mad. I based the story on the disappearance of Percy Fawcett.
https://www.history.com/news/explorer-percy-fawcett-disappears-in-the-amazon
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Ah. Participant observation
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Have you seen The Lost City of Z? Hollywood version of what might have happened to Percy Fawcett. Explorers fascinate me. Thanks, Neil.
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Seems he knows all too well.
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Perhaps he took getting to know the natives a bit too far.
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Wow! Samuel really did learn how to survive. This is a great switch – us thinking Mum is deluded then that twist and Samuel is a head hunter. Fab writing Lish
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Oh, thanks so much, Lynn. I truly had my doubts about this one. (As writers don’t we always doubt, doubt, doubt?) I had a friend who was told that her son had died, but she could feel him still existing in the world. And he wasn’t dead just homeless and hurt.
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So this was inspired by a true story? Gracious. Dangerous to hope, though – one could waste a lifetime hoping. And you’re right about the self doubt, though at least it makes us try harder! 🙂
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Yep, I’d say he knew alright! great tale. Wonder if he ever comes home…
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Thanks, Jelli. I don’t think he does.
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Samuel’s gone ‘native’. Great story.
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Seems like it. Thanks, Iain.
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Poor mother.He isn’t going to settle back at home with her any time soon!.
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Nope, gone for good I’m afraid. Thanks, Jilly.
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What a great tale. I like to think a mother would know… but still. Not having any sign for years and years… Now I want to see the movie!
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The movie was pretty good. The father takes his son on the last Amazon adventure, neither returned.Thanks, Lish
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Hmmm
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A mother always knows. Great story.
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I think she does. Thanks, Irene
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Gone native, has he? And a mother’s heart always knows.
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Gone native, or gone mad. Either way, I don’t think he’s coming home. Thanks, Alicia
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I love that a mother always knows! It’s the love that does it.
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Deep connections, me thinks. Thanks, Sascha.
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Killer last line! Looks like Samuel’s “gone native”. And mad.
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Thaks, Ali. I think the Amazon got to him.
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What a fascinating little tale. The love of his mother is so strong, and his too, even if he doesn’t know it yet, or has forgotten to care. The ten headed belt is interesting – head shrinking was such a peculiar practice. Top notch, Lish.
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Thanks, Kelvin. The thought of shrunken heads has always creeped me out. It was kind of fun to stick one or ten of them in more story. I’m not even sure Amazonians shrunk heads. Glad you stopped by. Maybe Samuel will come home?
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He will stumble there I am sure.
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Wonderfully built up to the (anti)climax.
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Thanks, Y.S.
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A mother is never going to give up hope until she has proof that her child is dead. I’m not sure Samuel wouldn’t be better off dead, mind. He’s lost his entire cultural milieu and heritage – and, of course, his family. A good take on the prompt – and on the story of Percy Fawcett.
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Thanks, Penny. I never could have been an explorer, dreading into unknown territories full of bugs, things that might want to eat me, and inclement weather. I admire those that could and still do.
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Dear Lish,
A mother knows. Sounds like he went crazy though. Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Just a little. Thanks, Rochelle.
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Anne might think her son’s a survivor but I know the truth, he’s just plain nuts :D.
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Indeed he is!
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Omg that last line. First parental dispair then… well told Alicia. He became his environment
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He truly did. I think some people become possessed by the adventures. Does that make sense? Thanks for reading.
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Makes total sense 😊
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I think he’s lost physically and mentally.
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I think you might be right.
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What an interesting take on the prompt! Very imaginative.
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Thanks, Dawn. Trying my best to think outside the box while staying within the parameters of the prompt.
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The madness of an explorer and a mom always knows. Nicely done. There is an alternative non-Hollywood view of the real life Percy Fawcett though.
https://www.spectator.co.uk/2017/04/the-lost-city-of-z-is-a-very-long-way-from-a-true-story-and-i-should-know/
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Thank you, I’ll check into that.
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https://www.history.com/news/explorer-percy-fawcett-disappears-in-the-amazon I found my info here to write the story. Thanks!
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Oh boy! A headshrinker! Musta got his Psych degree early! Well done! 😀
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Kinda’ creepy, right? Thanks for reading and making such a nicely light-hearted reply.
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I’m all for social integration but this is taking things a tad too far, I think.
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Perhaps a wee bit overboard on Samuel’s part. 🙂
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Talk about a surprise ending. Well done.
I wonder how long he has to be missing before I can collect his life insurance money?
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You may have to arm wrestle Mom for it! Thanks, Russell.
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That’s scary.
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Oh Alicia! A mother always knows.
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I would think so. Thanks, Louise.
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Thank you for pointing out the character this is based on.
I find it fascinating to watch a movie or read a book about past journeys out there
that men have tried to conquer. Watching the history channels about the exploration of America.
Nicely done again, Alicia. I have to agree with the others who said, “A mother always knows.”
Isadora 😎
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Goodness! You are playing catch-up and I so appreciate your taking the time to read my work. Explorers are amazing, that’s for sure.
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AAgghh!! I hope his poor momma never knows !
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Me, too!
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Moms know, she just didn’t know his slide into insanity. Suspenseful story with a twist at the end, love it! =)
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Thanks so much.
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A mother always knows. Her faith is to be admired. I hope she will be rewarded by a reunion eventually. So much story – well done.
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Thanks, Sarah Ann.
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Going mad in the jungle… quite likely… have you seen Klaus Kinsky in Aguirre Wrath of Gods…? that’s what I see in your story
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YESS!!!! I have seen that and had forgotten. Klaus Kinsky is good in just about anything and this was a fabulous tale. Thanks for reminding me, Bjorn.
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creepy and sad – but interesting and deep and a mother knows – so do not ever mess with a mother’s intuition
🙂
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You are so right. Mom’s know. Thanks for reading and leaving a comment.
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A lot of dialogue can be a difficult thing to squeeze into a 100-word story, but you used it to great effect here (I like that you didn’t bloat it with any ‘he saids’ or ‘she saids’). The conversation gave us all the back story we needed, the last line answered the question raised by the conversation, but left us with many more! Cleverly done!
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Thanks, Thom. A few FF participants use dialogue for their stories. Thought I’d give it a whirl. I’m glad you found that it worked. Alicia
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I thought it worked really well!
I just written a story for the new prompt using mostly dialogue. Hopefully mine will work too!
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What a truly amazing story, Alicia.
I loved how the mother’s instinct and faith won in your story.
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Thanks so much, Moon.
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Looks like he feel prey to jungle even if he is alive. I hope his mother never finds out the truth.
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Me too! Thanks.
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A very well told story- – felt gripped immediately – and effective dramatic twist ending.
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Thank you! Who knows where the shrunken heads came from. 😉
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