Today, we Friday Fictioneers can thank our Fairy Blog Mother, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields, for the photo prompt. Thanks, Rochelle.
They said people who live in glass houses shouldn’t throw stones.
But our glass house, with its eccentric angles and high ceilings, was so perfectly beautiful
we felt above everyone else and threw stones with such fury no one knew when to duck.
Our stones consisted of angry words tweeted and Facebooked across the net,
leaving no need to own what we did. Times were glorious. We had such power.
Slowly they figured out where the stones originated.
Their revenge was quick and thorough.
Now our house is made of steel with perfectly formed angles
and bars across the door.
(100-words)
A lovely story of hubris and nemesis
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Thanks, Neil. You’re always the first to stop by. We should have coffee and a scone sometime.
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Sadly, virtual coffee lacks savour and bite. But the words have heft, don’t they?
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Ooh, scones, one of the things I miss most about Scotland! But with tea, surely, Alicia, we are not savages, after all.
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I can just picture C.E. sipping tea with his little pinky sticking straight out. 🙂
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Dear Lish,
Great allegorical story. And we who live in glass houses do tend to throw those metaphorical stones, don’t we. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle, and thanks for the beautiful picture. Have a glorious day.
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Both houses seem like traps.
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They do, don’t they?
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A story for our social media times, well done. Perhaps the best way to escape is to just turn the computer off…
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Yes!!! And oh how I wish I could. Although I do try to not throw stones. Thanks, Iain.
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I like how you’ve taken the glass bowl as a metaphor and developed it rather than using it in a more literal way. I struggle to use my imagination like that!
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Thanks for such a lovely reply. I appreciate it. Alicia
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Great metaphor, Alicia, and you work it out well and consistently. You conjured up a lovely picture of a surrealistic structure made of glass – your writing celebrates the freedom and beauty of the space. But when it’s abused, freedom and beauty are both lost… I love the conclusion!
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Thanks, Penny. Leaded glass always reminds me of fragile glass houses. Don’t know why. I’m so pleased you stopped by.
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Unless your live in Trump Tower. Then the walls are white washed.
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Yes, indeed, With gold plating here and there. But that, too, will crumble. Thanks for noticing the comparison.
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Really love the whole metaphor of glass and steel. Even if someone feels like glass inside on certain days they must show the world an outer steel. Really great story.
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What a lovely comment. Thanks, Lisa.
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So well done, Miss. How often it is true, isn’ t it? Those who shouldn’t do…
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They certainly do! Over and over again. Thanks.
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I’m glad they got their comeuppance. Great use of the photo!
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Thanks, Ali. People who hide behind social media should ALWAYS get their comeuppance (love that word. Haven’t heard it in a long, long time.)
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It was the first word that came to mind. Maybe it’s a Brit thing 🙂
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Nope! My mom used it all the time.
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Facebook has a lot to answer for! Delightfully different.
Click to read my FriFic tale
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Thanks very much, Keith.
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Great use of the prompt. A very modern tale of what goes around…
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Perhaps it will come around to a certain someone. Thanks, Clare
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Love that twist from metaphor to solid, crushing reality richly deserved. How the ‘mighty’ fall. Nicely done. Lish
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Thank you, Lynn. Sometimes the mighty need to take a bit of a dive.
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They do indeed. My pleasure Lish
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Ohhhh, a deep well here. Great writing. Scary in its reality, too.
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Thank you, Jelli. Social media has given cowards a curtain to hide behind. Like back in the old days, when I guy would call to break up with you. Not cool. And it’s only getting worse.
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Powerful stuff, Alicia, excellent use of metaphor.
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Thanks very much. Glad you stopped by. P.S. I make some wicked scones. Come for tea sometime.
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Shoot! I can’t watch the video you sent because “The uploader has not made this video available in your country.”
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The Proclaimers, I’m on my way.
It was my response to your invite for tea!
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Holy cow! There’s karma for you, and in these times, not far from reality.
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Sad but so very true. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Awesome metaphor! Well done! We should all be cognizant of living in glass houses…. 😉
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Yes indeed! Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.
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I wonder if this will ever happen… seems like people on social networks are invincible… hope one day the trolls can be put behind cyber bars.
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I’m with you on that, Bjorn. Thanks.
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I sense a reformed troll or one that has learnt a lesson. There is something about the anonymity of the internet that seems to bring out the worst in people. Nicely done.
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Kind of scary, yes? Thank you for stopping by.
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Beautifully done. And now they are trapped. A clever commentary on a very prominent issue these days.
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Yes, hopefully put away for a VERY long time. Thanks.
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Nicely done. I love what can be conveyed in just 100 words.
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It is pretty amazing. It keeps us writers sharp, doesn’t it? Thanks for reading and commenting.
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No hiding place! Expertly written crime story.
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Thanks, Liz.
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An amazing take…!
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Thanks so much.
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I just hope they meet their nemesis soon.
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Me too!
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This is a great little sinister tale of comeuppance. I am glad I’m not in either house!
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Thanks!
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I’ve always wondered, do people who live in glass igloos throw frozen snow balls?
Sounds like these folks got their comeuppance.
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Make a trip to visit the Inuits is in order. Thanks, Russell.
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Since I’m commenting late, I won’t use the words great metaphor but make believe I said it.
Social media: a love/hate relationship, we all have with it. Everyday, I wake and say, “Damn you social media, be gone”. but, then my horrid curiosity comes into play. I very much enjoyed reading this, Alicia. It’s definitely created dialog on your comments. Have a peaceful Sunday ….
Isadora 😎
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Thanks, Isadora. I’m with you on the social media thing. I sit down to write then think, “Oh, who’s contacted me today?” Then get sucked into Facebook or email or …. Have a wonderful day. Alicia
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Oh so well done. It never does to feel superior to others, or untouchable. Let the experience of these stone throwers be a lesson to others.
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Hopefully, they’ve learned a lesson. Thanks, Alicia
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Yay for justice!
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Indeed.
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