In response to today’s photo prompt, kindly posted by our fearless leader, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields, I’ve dipped my toes into the water of Sci-fi. Thanks to one and all who read my attempt! Happy Wednesday/Friday.
PHOTO PROMPT © Roger Bultot
Tiny creatures skittered beneath the dome of Bento’s trap.
Some had eight legs, others too many to count.
The first in the collecton were brilliant red and smelled like newly fallen rain.
This last batch, these puce-colored, two-headed beasts filled the dome with the stench of carrion.
And the screeches! That was the worst.
Still, Bento knew it was up to him to gather each and every one.
Whether it was covered in feathers or scales;
fell from the sky at noon, midnight or three.
The first hoard ate his father, the second his mother and son.
Ergh. Well, I’, glad that’s Bento’s job and not mine, I’d be useless at it!
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Better him than us, for sure! Thanks, Iain.
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Chilling! It’s such a pretty picture, and so many of us have gone for horror!
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I’ve not read any yet! Must get to it. Thanks, Neil.
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Your depiction of Bento’s world is very grisly and realistic
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Thank you so much, Larry. Sci-fi isn’t something I usually pursue.
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IT’s not for everybody but it can’ be really interesting
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Yikes! What an ending. 🙂
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Being eaten by insects has always been a horror for me! Thanks, Susan
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Oh this is so chilling, and that ending! :0 Great write.
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Thanks, Jennifer.
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scary, i guess he’s next in line. 🙂
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Goodness! I hope not. That’s why Bento’s Dome exists. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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When you have bugs you are supposed to call an exterminator. I hope Bento is like Arnold Schwarzenegger
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Ha! Maybe. Thanks for the suggestion.
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Deliciously scary story. Gives a whole new meaning to “Bento’s box”.
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That’s fun. I didn’t think of Bento boxes. One of my good friends is named Bento. Thanks.
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When you start added numerous legs, you give me the creepy-crawlies!
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Like centipedes. Those creep me out.
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Shudder…
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Ugh, I don’t envy him his task!
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Me neither!
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My goodness an invasion of the consuming bugs, at least he has them under control – at last.
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Nightmares at their worst. Thanks, James
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Yikes!
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😉
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Scary creatures these are. Bento better collect them whenever they may fall and how many they may be. A creepy plot nicely told.
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Thanks very much!
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Dear Lish,
This truly gave me the creeps. Good job! Tis the season. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
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It is the season, for sure. I think Pegman set that up! Good for them. Cheers, dear.
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Sorry, but this made me laugh.
Bento doesn’t seem too bright, so I hope he keeps a close count of his fingers!
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Wonderful! I hadn’t thought of it as funny but as Mom used to say, “To each his own.” I’ll advise Bento to keep track of all his digits. Thanks for reading and leaving such a delightful reply.
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Bento’s out there doing God’s work. To quote Mike Rowe “It’s a dirty job, but somebody’s gotta do it.”
Great work 🙂
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Yes, indeed! Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.
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This just makes me shudder–which means you wrote it very well 🙂
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Thank you!
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Love this. Makes me wonder if the rotunda under the dome has destructive purposes. He certainly has reasons. Thanks, Alicia.
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Thanks! So glad you stopped by.
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For just dipping your toe, you did a fantastic job with sci-fi. Well-done! I imagined the creatures and had the shivers, then was terrified for Bento.
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Thanks. You are very kind. Cheers! Alicia
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Yikes!
DJ
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Right?
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An excellent Halloween story. Now all we need is a campfire and feel of something crawling on the back of your neck.
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Thanks, Russell. Crawly on necks is so evil!
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Although they were insect-like, were the creatures sentient, even perhaps intelligent? I do hope not…
Creepy-crawly story! Brrrr!
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Nope! There just regular old bugs. Thanks, Penny! Happy Halloween.
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Chilling!
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😉
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I do not like bugs… now I like them less! Very creepy and well done!!
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I don’t mind bugs, but I’d be very angry if they started eating my family. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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I actually shivered whilst reading this – that doesn’t often happen!
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Mission accomplished! Thanks, Keith.
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Oh no!! Whoa what a great sci fi piece
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Thanks very much, Laurie.
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Kind of nightmarish, especially the multi-legged part. Well done!
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Thank you, Jilly
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Poor Bento… I wonder why he was hired for such an ordeal…
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I think the crazy guy volunteered! Thanks, Bjorn.
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Rather Bento than me, I can barley touch a snail’s shell
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😉
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Wow, that was creepy!
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Good 😉 Thanks.
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