Each of us knows exactly what to do
when the village men are absent
and danger looms
within or without
Mother tutored me
Grandmother tutored her
The rules
set for three millennia
never change
Each carved symbol bespeaks a specific danger
Only we women know the meaning
Our shelters have been torched
Children have pox
Wolves plundered the winter store of venison
Much pride lies in the ease of our communication
No drums
No spurred horses
No rending of garments
Simply a red mark scratched upon a symbol
Then, Our Raven
takes wing
knowing
precisely
which flight-path is required
I liked the interpretation of the symbols, and the traditions they represented. Nicely done.
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Thanks, Iain. You are a superstar of reading FF stories. I appreciate that.
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You’re welcome Alicia
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Fabulous take on the photo prompt. Absolutely loved this!
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Thanks so very much. Cheers!
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Love it! Great take on the prompt!
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Thanks, Penny. This carving reminded me of carved stones in some fields in Ireland. No one was really sure what they were for, or what the symbols meant.
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women are indeed smarter than men. 🙂
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Or just more organized a bit more rational when war is involved? Thanks for stopping by. I always appreciate it.
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Layers of fantasy baked to crisp perfection
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What a lovely comment. Thank you.
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This is beautiful, an epic poem condensed into 100 words. Great job.
-David
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Thanks so much!
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This felt so realistic and I could imagine the times of small meetings to teach the symbols and prep
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Oh, good, I’m glad. Thank you.
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😊
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Beautiful. Just beautiful.
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Thank you, Sandra
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Every symbol a story. Nice!
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Thanks, Ali! I found the symbols so warlike and wanted to add a woman’s calming touch.
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I’m glad someone knows what those symbols mean. I like the fact that the teachings had been passed from generation to generation. Lovely poem, Lish.
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Thanks, Russell. Someone has to know what those scrawls mean, right?
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Great poetry, I like the finality of the last verse.
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Thank you, James.
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A wonderful interpretation of the artist’s work.
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Thank you, Keith
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Dear Lish,
I love the voice in this. Beautifully primitive and poetic. Brava!
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle! Has anyone ever told you that you’re a superstar for reading so many FF stories, while painting and writing and going to fairs? I’m sure they have. Still . . .
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Beautifully done, Alicia. The women are the storytellers and the keepers of the events.
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Thank you, Dale.
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I really like the sense you create of the quiet and enduring of power of the women in your story – in the ‘fable’ you tell as well as a message of our time. Subtly done – good writing.
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Thanks very much.
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For some reason, an old song came to mind:
Reuben, Reuben I’ve been thinking
What a glad world this would be
If the men were all transported far beyond the Northern Sea!
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I love this song. Sometimes I would thoroughly agree.
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I remember singing that somewhere between grades 3 and 5, it seems. We always traded girls and boys on the appropriate verses, and there was some goo-natured competition. Fun day, so innocent, looking back.
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Loved this. Simply gorgeous
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Thanks vey much, Laurie
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I loved this. Read it several times because there is something very satisfying in the language and natural rhythm.
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Thanks for the lovely comment. Cheers! Lish
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The rhythm of your story is fluid and beautiful. I loved the interpretations of the symbols through the generations of women. Very nice!
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Thank you, Brenda. I hope you had a good Thanksgiving.
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This is wonderful… the wisdom of communication through the symbols.
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Thank you, Bjorn.
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Great take, thoughtful and thought provoking piece
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Thanks, Michael.
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Beautifully layered.
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Thank you very much.
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