Oh, they call it the Luck o’ the Irish
But they know not what they’re sayin
for it’s the strength of we beansídhe,
our intertwined arms and legs
and songs sung when the boyos
are gone to fields
of war
and testosterone
that keeps our world in balance
Skirts gathered above the muck
we tend our family fields
Plant potatoes while
rearing children
hoping they turn out
far better than their elders
We teach daughters to
tend sheep
card wool
and knit sweaters
that announce our clan
with pride
And show them how to say
No!
That is not for me
The boys?
We do our best to
make them brave
and smarter than their fathers
None of us wants to lose
another
husband, father, son
to war
In the end,
the lot of us
help our boys muster
the strength
to avoid anger
And offer nothing less than peace
I like that very much, Lish. You’ve written a wonderful monologue which feels so poignant and so right. I love the message behind the story. The voice you use seems completely authentic. This is just outstanding.
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Oh, Penny! You are very kind. Thanks for making my day.
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Authentic voice to this poem, brushing away the fantasy around St Patrick’s Day and getting down to brass tacks. Far from luck, sounds like hard work and determination!
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Thanks for both comment. Those trees looked totally mystical to me. Cheers!
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But of course i totally missed the reference to the beansidhe. So fantasy and myth it is!
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A heartfelt poem Alicia – it spoke. Well done.
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(my comment was cut short- here’s the rest ) ..to me about the strength of the Irish women, their endurance, and caring and hope for peace.
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Doesn’t that make you crazy when a comment flies into space before you’re finished? I often think the women are so much stronger than men when times are tough. Thanks for reading and going back to finish your thoughts.
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As others have said, lovely voice here Lish, lyrical but in no way whimsical. Speaks of a hard life but a worthy one. Let’s hope they succeed in their hopes for their children
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Always hopes for the children. Sometimes it works, sometimes not so much. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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My total pleasure Lish 🙂
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Stunning. Love the voice and the recurring theme of a hope for better.
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Thanks, you are such a sweetie.
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