“Uncle Dato built it.”
“Why?”
“It pleased him.”
“He calls it Memory Tree.”
Laughter from five cousins scorches the air.
“This from a man with dementia?”
“Open a door.”
“Holy der’mo!”
“Hello, Uncle.”
“Open.”
The eldest complies.
“Give it to me.”
A slip of yellowed paper passes hand to hand.
“Our wedding day. Zoya wore blue silk. Another.”
The youngest opens a door.
“Our firstborn lived three days. Another.”
“The army arrived. Few are left. Another.”
“The sun shone so brightly today. My heart is filled with joy.”
“We are eating dogs. Another.”
Doors open, shut, open, shut.
In less than an hour, memories of an entire lifetime flow over those gathered around the Memory Tree.
The final note.”My brothers have sons, I have none. I will pour love upon my nephews.”
Uncle Dato nods at each man before taking leave.
Silence. Then laughter.
“That’s one crazy old man.”
Disrespect At Its Finest
Posted: April 7, 2019 in What Pegman SawTags: cousins, disrespect, memories, sharing, undeserved scorn
Love this, Lish!
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Thanks, Dale. I almost fiddled with it again this morning but one has to stop at some point. Have a lovely Sunday!
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I feel ya.
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And one beautiful piece of writing!
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Thanks very much. What a lovely comment.
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Dear Lish,
Lovely and imaginative piece. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. The picture makes me wonder what the sculpture really is. Cheers!
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Superb story. I always appreciate dialogue moving the narrative forward. Well done!
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Thank you, Josh. We use this method in a writing practice group I’m in. It’s kinda’ tough sometimes when you’re under a five minute time constraint.
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What a good idea of the old man! His nephews were certainly disrespectful. And I don’t think the old man cared.
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Ha! Me neither. Thanks, Penny.
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Wow. Just wow. Love where you took this. It’s hard to imagine the tree is anything but what your story reveals it to be.
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Thanks so much, Karen. I still wonder about that tree. Like what are those random things at the top? Birdhouses? Have a grand day!
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