I’m so grateful to Rochelle for posting the Friday Fictioneers prompt a day early! I’ve missed being here and her wee error was perfectly timed. She truly is a wonderful Fairy Blog Mother!
Most have forgotten. Shame on them.
Some say it never happened. They are wrong.
I was there, picking up the pieces.
Before it began I collected grandmothers exhausted by a good life,
babies that died too soon, worn-out fathers.
A simple cycle. Life. Death. Life.
After? Oh, after, I lifted souls from broken bodies on battlefields,
from children in the rubble of bombed-out houses,
from Jews, homosexuals, the crippled and mentally insane
left in makeshift graves dug in forest mud.
Please believe me. I do have a heart.
And you, mankind, broke it every day for six interminable years.
Powerful piece, Alicia
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Thank you, Neil.
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Dear Lish,
If my error lured you back to FF it was worth it. 😉 Powerful piece. Have you by chance read The Book Thief by Markus Zuzak?
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I’ve listened to it as an audiobook about 25 times! Read it twice. Thus… this story. I love that book. Each time I “hear” something new. Caught me!
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The movie was one of the best adaptations I’ve seen Really well done.
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Excellent poem.
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Thank you and MERRY CHRISTMAS!
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Beautifully done, Alicia.
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Thank you, Dale. MERRY CHRISTMAS.
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Merry Christmas, Alicia!! 🌲☃️🔔
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Powerful and oh, so, true …. 😦
Mankind has been unkind to man. Too often. Too much.
May we evolve to better than this. For we can.
We can.
Na’ama
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May mankind come around sooner than later. Thanks for stopping by and leaving a reply. Cheers of the season. Alicia
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🙂 Cheers back!
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Telling your story from death’s perspective makes it that much more impactful.
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Thanks! And a very Merry Christmas to you. I’m glad we met through Friday Fictioneers.
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You are very welcome. Merry Christmas!
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Mankind has a lot to learn and unlearn & gain.
Hope we don’t see such pain & repeat of such insanity again…
The Monument – Anita
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Indeed! And I hate to be all gloom and doom but it doesn’t seem to be happening. Thanks for reading and leaving a reply.
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Wow. This is incredibly good.
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Thanks for your kind words. Happy New Year!
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welcome back! it’s worth waiting for this wonderful piece.
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Thanks so very much! Cheers!
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A lovely piece, very powerful. I like the telling from the perspective of Death.
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Thanks, Ali. Happy Holidays.
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Aye, and sadly we’re still breaking it every moment of everyday. Beautifully written, Alicia. Love it!
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Thanks, Bear. You’ve disappeared from Facebook. Is everything ok? I miss your artwork!
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I had an issue with fb… I’m still there. I’ll look you up an send a new friend request. You can find me here: https://www.facebook.com/bstarfire.mcquinn
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Bleak and powerful, Lish. That we should break death’s heart is a grim indictment of the human race.
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It is, isn’t it? Thanks for reading! Happy New Year.
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Well, you have certainly given me something to consider. That death has his own regrets and heartbreaks is a profound idea.
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Thanks! It’s not my idea. I borrowed it from The Book Thief by Markus Zuzak. I love that book.
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I think I need to read it.
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Back with a powerful story, Alicia. I’ve missed your input. Happy New Year.
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Thanks, Sandra. I’ve missed being at FF. Off all the days of the week my Wednesdays are super busy and I often forget! Not like I couldn’t submit on a Thursday. 🙂 Happy New Year to you.
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Crushing, Lish. Bare words and a dreadful truth. Well told
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Thank you, Lynn. Happy New Year to you and yours.
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And to you, Lish. I hope 2020 is brilliant for you
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Wow, lovely. A perspective of fact. Death sees it all.
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Thanks, Laurie! Happy New Year to you and yours.
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And to you and yours as well!
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