Lacy’s shop is packed with found objects. Townpeople claim magic hides within them. Some say good, others whisper wicked.
Mamma says, “Nope, you ain’t goin’ in!” Today I disobey. The bell above the door jingle-jangles. Lacy shoots me the stink-eye. Don’t care. Her store smells like magic: dried rosemary, old books, mouse droppings. I rattle a bowl of colored shells, rub the forehead of a human skull. Lacy raises an eyebrow. I shuffle on.
When Mamma finds me, she shakes me hard. Twirls me towards a mirror. My eyes are purple cowry shells and my curly blonde hair has vanished.
Black Magic
Posted: September 9, 2020 in Friday FictioneersTags: disobeying, magic, shop of odd objects, skulls, transformation
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I can just here Mamma shouting “What you done with your eyes, child?”
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And, if she’s anything like my mom, a whole lot more.
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Wow. Purple cowrie shells for eyes. Result!
A fun story with a tendency to horror – nicely done, Lish
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Thanks!
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Nice little horror piece.
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Thank you.
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what can you say? kids will be kids. 🙂
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Exactly! Tell them no and they’ll do just the opposite.
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OMG! Does she EVER sell anything at this rate? Nice horror story, Lish!
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Ha! Maybe. I love this comment. Thanks.
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Magically terrifying!
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Thank you.
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Dear Lish,
Eew. Sensory story, mouse droppings and all. Hopefully the effects can be undone.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks for noticing. I was trying for the sensory thing cause I so often forget. Cheers!
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That’ll teach you to disobey Mom!
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Exactly so!
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From “Mama Told Me Not to Come”, written by American singer-songwriter Randy Newman…
“Mama told me not to come
Mama told me not to come
That ain’t the way to have fun”
Very good story. Loved it.
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I remember that song – thanks for the earworm and thanks for stopping by.
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And those are shells that were her eyes …. Oh wow! I think the poor girl learned what Lacy’s magic was all about the hard way.
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Indeed! Thanks.
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Peculiar and sinister love it
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I’m glad you did. Thanks.
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Always listen to mamma!
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Yep!
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Nothing more enticing than defying mama’s orders…. love the descriptions. I could just smell and feel the place. And am not that inclined to enter, myself 😉
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Me neither!
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I had a feeling with all the rattling and rubbing something unexpected was going to happen 🙂
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Keeps your hands to yourself. Do not rattle, do not touch. Thanks, Ali
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Hopefully, when Mamma drags her out she’ll revert to her former self. Chillingly descriptive!
Here’s mine!
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Thanks, Keith. Hopefully, she will be back to normal soon.
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Lacy put a spell on her things. I like how the disobedience is rewarded with an evil magical spellbound punishment. Who would want to visit that shop?
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Not me!!!!
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Oh my! Spooky, and I loved it!
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Thanks! I’m glad.
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Powerful juju! It works if you believe in it, and she’s been conditioned to believe in it. Hopefully the curl will grow back.
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Thanks, me too
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You’re welcome.
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Oh dear, mama did know best. Love this horror story nicely woven.
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Mothers usually do! Thanks so much for stopping by.
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I hope the blonde curls were replaced by something else. Going bald seems like a tough punishment for rattling a few shells. Lovely piece.
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Just a wee lesson. Not permanent. Thanks, Sandra
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“Her store smells like magic: dried rosemary, old books, mouse droppings.” My garage must be the most magical place in the world.
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Ha! That made me laugh, thank you.
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Not your regular place to go for beauty products… sounds like a bad choice
Ceaseless rosemary … google that.
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