No Luck with Magic

Posted: July 12, 2017 in Uncategorized


Tashira collected everything, just as the old ones had instructed. Two hundred fairy wings stored in a crystalline jar. Four dragonfly eyes, two red and two green. A gossamer gown from Princess Hashir, the troll who lived beneath the Covfefe River. She melted three bars of gold to create a candelabra that held a single candle created from the tallow of bears. All that work for nothing. William the Orange remained a king who played while his selfish children ruled the kingdom, and tomorrow she would marry the eldest son who looked every bit like Dracula. Tashira began to weep.

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Comments
  1. Dear Lish,

    I’m biting my tongue here. Anything political is strictly coincidental, right? Of course right! I nearly choked on my covfefe.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  2. neilmacdon says:

    A fable for our times

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  3. Iain Kelly says:

    Excellent – loved the mix of ancient myth with modern political satire. Enjoyed it, even in the despair of the reality we live in.

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  4. Anything Orange these days make me think of modern times… I think ti would take something like wearing a hijab to scare of the ugly prince.

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  5. Well done. It would be lovely if a few spells could turn things around. Until then, most characters will remain unhappy.

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  6. Sandra says:

    A fairy tale turning into political satire. Who would have thought it of you….? ๐Ÿ™‚

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  7. wmqcolby says:

    Nice story, Alicia. Then, I looked at the comments … channeling the inner Jonathan Swift huh? Well, you really have a brilliant work here, I will say, political commentary aside.

    “William the Orange …?” Hahaha! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  8. k rawson says:

    Oh my word, this is rich! Laughing out loud at every line. Not laughing so much at real life though….

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  9. William the Orange… hahahaha ๐Ÿ˜€ Good one, Alicia ๐Ÿ™‚ You never know, the spell might have a delayed action, thus saving us all ๐Ÿ™‚

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  10. Love this! What an incredible photo prompt; it might just be tempting enough…. Love the ironic humor, and magical touches here, Lish.

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  11. I love the way your tale carries the reader from fairy tale to political comment! Absolutely brilliant.

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  12. Poor Tashira. She’ll have to find some more magic cookery books – plenty in the second-hand shops, no doubt.

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  13. draliman says:

    It started so fantastical and came to earth with a bump ๐Ÿ™‚
    At least now we know what “Covfefe” is heh heh ๐Ÿ™‚ I wonder who the troll could be…?

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  14. gahlearner says:

    Oh Alicia, you’re a bad woman. Very, very bad. The baddest. It’s true. I was full of admiration for all the magical things when you threw me into a fit of hysterical laughter with the Covfefe River. The baddest, believe me…

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  15. I would like to wake from this fairytale please with all the oranges banished to the mother ship.
    I like it!
    Tracey

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  16. Varad says:

    Ahhahhaaha… This was just too brilliant. William the Orange? Covfefe? Tashira should wear a hijab and start speaking mexican-spanish just to get on the orange’s nerves. Well done.

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  17. Life Lessons of a Dog Lover says:

    This was loads of fun. I do feel sorry for her marrying the son that looks like Dracula. In this political climate sometimes commentary just leaks out from our fingers.

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  18. Laurie Bell says:

    Omg brilliant! Burst out laughing on that one line!

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  19. plaridel says:

    it looks like this week’s prompt evoked more creativity than before. well done.

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  20. Liz Young says:

    She shouldn’t have tried so hard – she’d be happier with a woodsman.

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  21. Sarah Ann says:

    Beautiful descriptions โ€“ so evocative. And all that collecting and hard work for nothing.

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  22. Oh my, it’s always amazes me where these writings go with the photo prompt. It all began ‘Once upon a time’ and ended up in ‘The Underworld Below or Above’. There’s something about politics that creeps … creeps into the mind. Great take, Alicia.
    Izzy ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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  23. We need a different potion, maybe, an eye of newt..something…surely there is something…!
    You’ve described a very real sense of urgency, Alicia.

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  24. Clever. I do love satire … although often the people who are the object of such, don’t have a sense of humour, so it’s an excellent idea to double-wrap it as a fairy tale.

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  25. This was great, Alicia. I loved the name of the river. Poor girl and after everything she collected. Good writing as always. ๐Ÿ˜€ — Suzanne

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