Violins
pink roses and red wine smoother than velvet
Kisses down my neck
across my shoulders
over the rise of my breasts
You seduced me with promises
Whispering
Come, cross the bridge
from a dull
ordinary life to
one filled with excitement
and laughter
A life only I can provide
I
Love
You
My head spun
at the sound of your voice
My knees shook
when you slipped
a thin silver ring
on my finger
And, then
there it was
A new life full of
hard work
successes and failures
tears and tantrums
lost jobs
And found friends
Beautiful children
Pets who adopted us
and pets who allowed us to adopt them
Excursions
to the store, jobs
And finally
across the sea
to Paris Madrid Africa
Now it is I who
kiss your shoulder
and warm your wizened breast
with a time-wrinkled palm
And a whispered
I
Love
You
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Wonderful poem, Lish. Last summer I walked across that very bridge. My hope was to find some kind of cool neighborhood on the other side, but it was all construction.
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It does look like some sort of magic bridge that would have something cool on the other side ~ construction not being on that list. Thanks for reading. Lish
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Oh my, I love this epic poem. I love the way it meanders through a life, with an ebb and tide of good and bad, just like life. Love especially how it slows down on the I love you.
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Thanks, Karen. I am not a poet, so don’t really know how to time things or punctuate or capitalize or not. It just seemed like a story to tell in short sentences. I always appreciate your input.
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You’re far more poet than I am. I loved the way it came across.
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I was sure at first that some betrayal was coming, to follow all that good, but no. This catalogs one of those rare long term loves that are the stuff of fairy tales, where ordinary life is an adventure, because you’re not alone. Lovely.
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Thanks! This mirrors my marriage. Sans the kids, no kids ~ by choice. I have been blessed with a wonderful, kind, generous man who makes me laugh, makes me angry but I think I do the same to/for him.
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As others have said, just lovely Lish. A life well lived and filled with love – what more could any of us hope for? Gorgeous
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Thank you. Lynn. I was trying to go on the gentle side of a story ~ for once.
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This was absolutely gorgeous, Alicia. I adored it.
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Shucks! Thanks, Dale. It felt like a “happy ending” kind of day.
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