Ten days before Papa’s return from his mission, Mama gifted me a miniature theater with twenty-two minikin figurines. My ladies wear frocks of silk. The gentlemen sport suits of wool.
Mama spent tedious hours explaining the figurine’s placement on the stage. Formations include: ‘Stay in The Forest’, ‘Run’, ‘We’re Safe.’ Nothing makes sense. But no one questions Mama.
Tonight five uniformed men stormed our home, shouting, “Where is he?” Luckily, Mama understands German and the men knew no French. Mama shrugged, kissed one man on the cheek, and turned to me. “Fosette, ‘Run’. Place the stage in the window.”
Very realistic and scary
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Thanks, Larry!
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A lovely reveal of what the senseless lesson actually meant
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Thank you, Neil.
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Thank you, Neil. I’m glad the message came through.
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This gave me a serious case of the chills. I’m so glad the child can run to a safe place, but what about Mama? 😦 A heartrending story.
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Ah, the message in the characters arranged on the stage was “Run! Papa.” It was a code thought up between Fosette’s parents. Maybe I missed the mark.
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I got the gist right then but the details wrong. Either way I really enjoyed your creativity.
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Oh, I loved this, Lish! Wonderfully done!
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Thanks, Dale. Donn helped me work through thoughts and punctuation.
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Well Donn done dandy! A wonderful partnership.
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He’s a good partner. Oh! and I loved the picture. Where did you take it?
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Wow, that was some story. Chillingly, brilliantly done!
Susan A Eames at
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Thanks, Susan. My sisters and I had a miniature stage when we were kids ~ paper dolls. This reminded me of what fun we had (no secret messages, though.)
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Excellent story, Lish! You conveyed the details very clearly and powerfully. Even the fact that the lesson seemed senseless to Fosette makes sense when you think that it minimises the risk of her betraying anything – and also, of course, protects from the fear of knowing her father’s danger for as long as possible.
Very well done!
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Thanks, Penny. As I told Dale, my husband helped me clarify details. The first time he read it I saw a big question mark on his forehead.
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I’m also lucky like that – my wife reads almost everything I write before I publish it. She’s saved numerous slip-ups!
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It’s always good to have someone to bounce ideas off of. Otherwise, we’d look as if we couldn’t write! 😉
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The tricks of the resistance are so subtle.
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Wouldn’t it be fun to know what everyone did? There’s probably so much we don’t know.
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Excellent, the full meaning being revealed at the end. Well done.
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Thanks, Iain!
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mama found an ingenious way to trick the enemy. well done.
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Indeed she did. Thanks so much for reading.
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A chilling, brilliant piece. Well penned.
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Thank you!
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A clever way of leaving Papa a message! Nice one 🙂
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Thank you.
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Dear Lish,
Very clever mother and a very clever author. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle.
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I got chills from this one. Well done with the training, Mama, and well done with the story, Lish.
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Thanks for the lovely comment.
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I love the child’s perspective in this and how it told a tale of resistance… the little details helped me and the stage sets made sense in the end… wonder what happened to Ma
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Thanks, Bjorn! Good to see you back.
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This one’s a winner! Mama was one smart lady. What times they lived through!
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Thanks. I wouldn’t want to have lived during that time!
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